Comments on: Grievances against demanding schedules, a chapter from ‘Impossible Monsters’ http://www.robertjamesrussell.com/2009/12/11/friday-what-is-this-friday-you-speak-of/ Writer. Dreamer. Nerd. Sun, 18 Sep 2011 01:31:36 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 By: Robert James Russell http://www.robertjamesrussell.com/2009/12/11/friday-what-is-this-friday-you-speak-of/comment-page-1/#comment-882 Robert James Russell Mon, 24 May 2010 14:34:15 +0000 http://www.robertjamesrussell.com/2009/12/11/friday-what-is-this-friday-you-speak-of/#comment-882 Thanks! I quite like this chapter myself. Thanks! I quite like this chapter myself.

]]> By: Tarana http://www.robertjamesrussell.com/2009/12/11/friday-what-is-this-friday-you-speak-of/comment-page-1/#comment-881 Tarana Mon, 24 May 2010 06:21:54 +0000 http://www.robertjamesrussell.com/2009/12/11/friday-what-is-this-friday-you-speak-of/#comment-881 Hey....I just sent you some suggestions after reading an earlier submission. But, in "Anthony" you did it. Your sentences are formed wonderfully, shorter and stronger. Dialogue is super. See! It works! I really got into this faster than the other submission I read.... Great job! Hey….I just sent you some suggestions after reading an earlier submission. But, in “Anthony” you did it. Your sentences are formed wonderfully, shorter and stronger. Dialogue is super. See! It works! I really got into this faster than the other submission I read….

Great job!

]]> By: JR http://www.robertjamesrussell.com/2009/12/11/friday-what-is-this-friday-you-speak-of/comment-page-1/#comment-403 JR Fri, 11 Dec 2009 20:44:25 +0000 http://www.robertjamesrussell.com/2009/12/11/friday-what-is-this-friday-you-speak-of/#comment-403 Great stuff, Rob. Can't wait for publication so I can read the whole thing. I especially love the dialogue: it's natural, not forced. You don't load the story down with adverbs and adjectives that are supposed to tell the reader how everyone feels; that comes through in the actions and words of the characters. Really enjoyed it! Great stuff, Rob. Can’t wait for publication so I can read the whole thing. I especially love the dialogue: it’s natural, not forced. You don’t load the story down with adverbs and adjectives that are supposed to tell the reader how everyone feels; that comes through in the actions and words of the characters. Really enjoyed it!

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